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Ray of Hope

March 27, 2007

Darkness engulfing me from all sides,

A feeling of despair settling beyond all tides!

When down, my pillows bear the weight of my tears,

I have been doing this for years!

As a child, papa said don’t cry,

You are a GUY!

Grow up being so tough outside,

Only to be really soft inside!

Suddenly, in the dark, she reached out n wiped my eye,

She probably knew why!

She is always there for me at the end of the rope,

She is indeed my ray of HOPE!

6 comments

  1. Too good man… I never knew even you write poems… :)

    She will indeed be your Ray of Hope… and your inspiration too… :)


  2. Wowwww!!! Man, u r amazing!!! :)

    Loved it… :) Absolutely fab!!!

    Nice blog dude… Way to go :)


  3. Naren

    Let me take the honour to comment on ur 1 st post in ur blog :-) Jus like I find so much depth in u as a person , can I c so much depth in this poem…Simple and powerfull … Subtle and over whelming …

    Facts r very easy to b commented upon.. Abstract intangible stuffs give lasting feeling ..Let ur journey towards the abstract bring a lot of smiles to all the readers :-)

    Jus want tat “she” personified as the ray of hope to b for tat moment ” Forever “….


  4. Who is SHE????


  5. Great Naren, too good…never knew u had this talent too…loved it..


  6. eva da ava[;)]



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