
Ray of Hope
March 27, 2007Darkness engulfing me from all sides,
A feeling of despair settling beyond all tides!
When down, my pillows bear the weight of my tears,
I have been doing this for years!
As a child, papa said don’t cry,
You are a GUY!
Grow up being so tough outside,
Only to be really soft inside!
Suddenly, in the dark, she reached out n wiped my eye,
She probably knew why!
She is always there for me at the end of the rope,
She is indeed my ray of HOPE!
Too good man… I never knew even you write poems…
She will indeed be your Ray of Hope… and your inspiration too…
Wowwww!!! Man, u r amazing!!!
Loved it…
Absolutely fab!!!
Nice blog dude… Way to go
Naren
Let me take the honour to comment on ur 1 st post in ur blog
Jus like I find so much depth in u as a person , can I c so much depth in this poem…Simple and powerfull … Subtle and over whelming …
Facts r very easy to b commented upon.. Abstract intangible stuffs give lasting feeling ..Let ur journey towards the abstract bring a lot of smiles to all the readers
Jus want tat “she” personified as the ray of hope to b for tat moment ” Forever “….
Who is SHE????
Great Naren, too good…never knew u had this talent too…loved it..
eva da ava[;)]